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«У меня только это лето -

отпусти меня из диснейленда...» -

попросил пожилой мышонок

молодого политрука:

«...ведь сентябрь идет по следу

и из глаз его пахнет календулой,

из остывших его, отрешенных…

и не дрогнет его рука...»

Лейтенант говорит со штабом.

Лейтенант удивлен и взъерошен:

отворяет ему темницу,

и мышонок, взмахнув дверями,

догоняет вознесшийся табор.

И за ним, будто хлебные крошки,

на бетонку сыпятся цифры

из дырявого календаря…

15.01.2008
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Вот проблема с этими творческими людьми: они всегда желают быть композиторами, художниками и писателями.
В результате производством труб большого диаметра занимаются бездарности. (с)Рома Воронежский

"Пииты - будьте хорошими людьми! Берегите лес и бумагу - пишите в сети!"

"Книги - это кино для умных"

"Автор умер - но критик всё ещё жив".

"Рукописи не горят - но, в основном, не тонут" (с)

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Константин Реуцкий
2008-01-15 01:44:14
к.р.
проявляю слабость, идя навстречу пожеланиям трудовых коллективов и публикуючи тексты из архивов прежних лет. некогда выбракованные, теперь, ввиду неурожая новых, оне вполне прокатят. надеюсь, требовательные коллеги меня простят:)
kuzya
2008-01-15 09:41:07
Спасибо огромное!!!!!!!!!
е.<a href=http://publicator.org.ua/pub/egermann/>герман</a>
2008-01-15 10:59:32
Коллеги строгие - но прощают. Эх, почаще бы.
Три злостных флудера и редактор с бритвой в зубах
2008-01-15 11:26:55
прекрасный во всех отношениях
А я как раз подумал, это что-то из нового. Казалось бы, стихи К.Р. - это нечто такое, ну-у... э-э-э... классическое - а мне всегда они казались и кажутся экспериментальными. Понятно, что это пустые рассуждения, потому как хорошая поэзия - в любом случае эксперимент, да и плохая, собственно, тоже. Последней, впрочем, у К.Р. еще не наблюдалось, что замечательно.
Трудовой коллектив
2008-01-15 12:17:03
и моя душенька довольна!... Времен-но ) А вобще очень приятное стихо. за него тебе спасибо. И за то, что в кои-веки выбрался на Публо голубей поганять и миккимаусов )
tim
2008-01-15 12:39:55
"на бетонку сыпятся цифры из дырявого календаря…" – вот, что запомнилось. как такому не запомниться?..

привет, Костя!

)
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