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на конкурсной основе

Луноликие цистерны

Во густых полях люцерны.

По проселочной дороге

Мирно ехал бензовоз.

Позабыв про безопасность,

В небе– ясность, в сердце– гласность.

Тихо стелется под ноги

Дым совеццких папирос.

Взрыв раздался, еп та матерь!

Всю природу изнахратил!

Солнце грело лом металла,

Тлел водительский билет.

Вобщем, правило такое,

Что с огнем играть - не стоит.

А мозгов досталось мало,

Берегите с юных лет.

17.10.2007
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Вот проблема с этими творческими людьми: они всегда желают быть композиторами, художниками и писателями.
В результате производством труб большого диаметра занимаются бездарности. (с)Рома Воронежский

"Пииты - будьте хорошими людьми! Берегите лес и бумагу - пишите в сети!"

"Книги - это кино для умных"

"Автор умер - но критик всё ещё жив".

"Рукописи не горят - но, в основном, не тонут" (с)

КОММЕНТАРИИ
е<a href="http://publicator.org.ua/pub/egermann/">.герман</a
2007-10-17 13:12:46
бугагагагагага! 2 раза! классный стишок!!!!!
ифидщаа
2007-10-17 14:14:36
ААААААААААААААААААААААААААААААА!!!!!!!!!!!!
Не зря я весь этот флуд читал, который в семи или восьми предыдущих постах (за исключением одного или максимум двух) выставлен - раз добрался до ТАКОГО! Супер. Смешно.
Pulenovna
2007-10-17 15:37:55
))))))))))
Я нормально, я болею...мне ношпу с димедролом колют, скоро пойду на лаботомию...и все будет ваще зашибись...Стхо, гуд)
е.герман
2007-10-17 16:54:39
2амели - выздаравливай! ждемс тебя с нетерпением
тим
2007-10-17 18:48:17
"Тихо стелется под ноги Дым совеццких папирос" – очень душевно.
согласен со всеми предыдущими спикерами. очень смешно и как-то разухабисто...

сообщение от германа от с ани:"В небе– ясность, в сердце– гласность" читать как "В небе – ясность, в сердце – гласность".)))

амели, выздоравливая давай, кончай колеса глотать!
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2007-10-18 11:20:54
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2007-10-18 15:54:21
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2007-10-19 09:08:26
Весело!
И легко написано: автор - отличная пара к Амели! (в хорошем смысле))))
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